Why Chapters?, Mrs Nystrom

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Good Day Folks,

Cover James Saves the Moon

One day last week as I was entering the school for a PTO Meeting Conner 3rd grader playing in his yard yells . “Hi Mrs. Nystrom. “I like your book. I have a question” So I say Hi Conner, glad you liked it. What is your question. Well I had trouble hearing the question and I was 8 minutes late already to the meeting and I am the President. So I yell I stop over after or tomorrow morning to answer the question. He was good with that. The Next Morning Conner asked why does it have chapters?  I was not expecting this question. Very good question. Why did I use chapters I said.

This is why I use chapters.

1. I make an out line after I free write to organize my thoughts and  it  keeps my timelines in order.  So the outline usually turns in to the chapters. Once I have the outline the story is broken down by the main events for the chapter. I label my outline with a title, which turns in to the titles for each chapter. This keeps me on topic as I edit each chapter during rough drafts and edits and the final stages of the story.

2. While I was homeschooling my son in English while living in Iceland, I found it was easier to teach him with chapter books even though he was 7 and 8 years old. I also think it is easier to come to stopping points at a end of a chapter. I think it is easier to teach grammar with chapters even when they are only one or two pages.  Example, How many sentences in the 1st paragraph in chapter one. Now tell me the noun, verb, adverb and adjective in the second sentence in paragraph three. etc. Rather than go to page 4 and answer the above questions. Comprehension I think is easier tested by referring to the chapter rather than the pages or whole story.

3. Nearly every book I read as a kid were chapter books. I was lucky I was a exceptional reader at a young age.

4. I think having two or three pages per chapter helps a young reader become a confident reader and hopefully will rise to the challenge of expanding to a higher level of reading. When they can finish one chapter and tell a teacher or parent I read two chapters today instead of 6 pages. Adult figures react better to a child telling them they read 1 or more chapters rather than two pages to 6 pages. Its basic conditioning.  It sounds better.  I also hope the child forgets how many pages but remembers how many chapters. I have found children are intimidated when they have many pages to read. But ask them to read a chapter and they are more receptive to this.

Now I explained this in less detail to Conner and he shook his head and was good with that. Wanted to know when my next book was coming out. I said hopefully soon. He will get a free signed copy because he asked a very good question.

Thanks Conner for the question and blog idea. WB

P.S. Just a reminder “James Saves the Moon is available at

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One Moon, lovely memories, creativity!

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Tonight the moon is so beautiful it reminded me of the evening this story began in Iceland. I just wanted to share one of the beautiful Illustrations by Mr. Weidman in my book James Saves the Moon. For some reason I received a lot of posts today from or about Iceland. When driving home from the store I saw this beautiful moon. The moon beams is suppose to have healing properties so I suggest you get out and enjoy a little moon beam tonight. I am. I also came up with an opening paragraph to my 4th story with James and his Icelandic Friends and the Icelandic 13 Santas. So exciting. Still working on the 3rd one. I am stuck, but I think the creative synopsis are finally working in my head. I hope to have dreams tonight that will guide me  with my 3rd story. I need to decide which to focus on my 3rd story or work on a new idea formulating in my head. (New Moon Book Store)Sometimes it gets confusing. I think next week I will work on Amongst the Clouds which is the third story in the James and Syvok adventures. Although no title yet the 4th story idea in this series is Christmas related but I do not know if I could finish in time for Christmas this year. As the days get shorter and  coolness in the air begins, I seem to always want to write about an adventure with 13 Icelandic 13 Santas or Yule Lads meet James, Syvok and Matt. It would be such fun. Who knows maybe more of the story will come to life in the next few days. Enjoy the healing properties of the moon beam tonight. WB

P.S. Just a reminder “James Saves the Moon is available at

solsticepublishing.com, amazon.com, smashwords.com, barnesandnoble.com,schulerbooks.com, powells.com

Happy Birthday Day to my twins.

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My girls turn 9 today. It was quite a surprise 9 years ago that not only was I able to have another child that I was going to have twin girls. So Happy Birthday Alexandria and Bethany my beautiful, smart strong willed gals. You are truly wonderful daughters.

The girls are so excited that they were included in my second story as two turquoise dragonets. Bethany said she hopes I get a contract on her birthday for the second book. They want to hit the road and promote the books. Alex is the dragon with the horns, she decided. They are both so much fun. My children have been the inspiration for this writing adventure I am on. They are truly a blessing. Have a wonderful day. WB

P.S. Just a reminder “James Saves the Moon is available at

solsticepublishing.com, amazon.com, smashwords.com, barnesandnoble.com

Good Things

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Well the Editor from my first book contacted me. YEAH!

I went to the website solsticepublishing.com and was enjoying the updates and looking at the information. Then I noticed the some of the email addresses had changed. So I resent my second manuscript Helga Returns and asked if I could have my bio added to the first book.

Christie Browers emailed  me back Saturday,(Hard working gal) on the bio question. She is looking into it. Some how it did not get into the original file by me. I guess I was to excited about getting published. I also noticed she has been promoted to President of Solstice Publishing. Congrats to her! Now I understand why I have not received any emails. I am relieved she contacted me. Hopefully soon she will let me know if they will publish the second story.  Have a Grand Day, WB

 P.S. Just a reminder “James Saves the Moon is available at

solsticepublishing.com, amazon.com, smashwords.com, barnesandnoble.com

Happy Friday

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Happy Friday!

Good News the local library has invited me to come to an Event. Meet the Author. Should be fun. I also may get to talk to a School near Farmington, NM thanks to a cousin in law who is a Teacher there and she liked my book James Saves the Moon. This one will be done through Video Conferencing I think its still called now.  Thanks Cynthia.  Of course I told her I now have to get a book out to my Texas Relatives they are the only ones I have not sent a book to yet. I will get that done next week. My wonderful Aunt Louise purchased one and we forgot to get it signed so I will send her a signed one soon in MN.

When the kids go back to school after Labor Day, I hope to get started on the Third story Hidden in the Clouds. This is a Syvok and James adventure. I hope to get started on a New Series as well New Moon Bookstore. And Idea from my friends Grace and Tracy. We were chatting in the van and I was chatting about the time I spent at the New Moon Book Store with My Mom. Grace said you should right some stories about that.

I think Grace is right I need a voice recorder. Then I can dictate my stories my friends are so wise. I think I will look into that on Saturday.

Everyone have a great weekend. Say a little prayer for the East Coast. WB

     P.S. Just a reminder “James Saves the Moon is available at

solsticepublishing.com, amazon.com, smashwords.com, barnesandnoble.com

I am so scattered today. Need to focus!

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My horoscope said I would see clarity today. Not! At least not this morning. I have been bouncing around all morning starting this start that. I have all these ideas in my head for new stories but their just ideas for the actual story . I am working on My twin girls birthday, PTO, Friends of the Library Used Book Sale, and Political Party Events. All these things need attention by August 30th. Frankly all I want to do is curl up with a good book and go some where else for the day. I want to hide.

I know its only been two business days since I submitted my second book. But I need that monkey off my back. It is always on my mind. Are they dumping me? Does the second story suck?Did I send it to the correct person? It goes on and on in my head. Should I just stop writing and find a job?

Two many questions today.

I think I will go pay bills now and write a list of items that need to get done for the rest of the week and see what happens! Its all good. Happy Tuesday to you all. WB

P.S. Just a reminder “James Saves the Moon is available at

solsticepublishing.com, amazon.com, smashwords.com, barnesandnoble.com

Now I Wait

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Well I submitted my second story today to Solstice Publishing imprint Fairy Tales and Dreams line.  I sure hope they will consider publishing this story too.  I spent most of the day working on cleaning out the office today. What a mess. My husband and I have been using the room for working and storage. Our work space no longer feels claustrophobic. Room to move and think. One of my goals for 2011 was to clear out clutter. I am hoping this will free my mind of wasteful clutter in my head too.  We can both spread out in our work spaces. Some Boxes still in the middle of the room many I have not opened since returning to the U.S from Iceland 6 years ago. I can’t believe its been that long now. Now I have to go through each one and decide what stays and what goes. All stored items will be moved to a plastic storage bin and moved to the basement. I am  switching out book shelves. Books are always welcome decoration for both of us. We love our books. We would move our many boxes of books instead of moving our bed or clothes. We have actually dumped furniture to make room in moving trucks for our books. They have traveled every where we have gone. We are a funny couple. Anyway plans tonight celebrating a special friends 70th birthday tonight. Happy Birthday Grace if you read my blog.  Have a great weekend. WB

Christmas in August

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I received my final illustration for my second story “Helga Returns”

When ever I receive an Illustration it feels like I am opening a Christmas present. It cannot download fast enough for me. The few seconds seems like waiting for Santa to arrive.

Kelly Murray out did herself as always. I have selected one of my favorites from the story. It is simple but the way she included the dragon was wonderful. I have a dragon on every illustration in both stories.Kelly like my first illustrator found clever ways to include a dragon on every illustration. Tomorrow I will submit this story “Helga Returns” to the publisher. I sure hope they will select it for publishing. Have a good night.WB

Number 2 done done and done (stone, rock,pebble)

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It is always good to finish a story. A little sad at the end for some reason. Maybe its because I am having such a fun adventure with my imaginary friends and now I have to return home. haha

Another verbiage question came up during my last reread out loud. This time rock, stone and pebbles. The pebbles description was correct. There is no difference between stone and rock. Maybe I thought stones are usually considered smooth and oval shaped. While rocks are rough and angle shaped. Stone sounds more adult than a rock. In the end again writing is crazy some times I decided when James refers to the communication stone, its called a rock. When the other characters refer to the communication stone it is a stone. Made easy and consistent in the story. I am done working for the day. Have a good weekend.WB

Holly Black Book Signing! I am so stupid

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One of my friends Grace asked me to attend Holly Black’s Book signing in Grand Rapids this week. At first I was like I have so much to do and need to finish my second story. Instead of thinking of a enjoyable evening the the responsible me comes out. I said yes so I could gather information how a book signing is conducted. Then I asked another friend Tracy to come along since she wants to help out when I have a book signing in Big Rapids.

So here I go with my note book enjoying the drive with two fun ladies. I get there and am writing down all of the proceedings. And wow is Holly Black funny, fun and entertaining. I have read the Spiderwick series and enjoyed it. I picked up complete volume set to be signed and Unicorns VS Zombies for my son. And now am going to start her series the Curse Workers. First book in the Series is White Cat. I had two books signed and she had bracelets to pick out of the type of curse worker we are. I picked up the grey one and now I am a memory curse worker and can change peoples memories. So fun. She also gave us all a free copy of “Tithe” audio book.

As I walked out I decided to give her my book. Grace and Tracy said you need your information in it.  Thinking this was just a information gathering thing for me. I did not have my business cards or my brief case. I always have books. For some reason now I am a nervous wreck right and can’t think at all. My wonderful friends calmed me down, told me to write the information on the last page. Which I did and gave it to her agent standing next to her. I hope she reads it and likes it. I will never leave my house again with out my brief case and cards need to be replaced in my purse.

The evening for some reason was magical. Perfect evening. When we got back to Big Rapids, we enjoyed some good conversation and wine on the patio. Here is her website http://www.blackholly.com.WB